Blogosphere Drafting of Bush Torture Indictment

I’ve drafted an indictment of Bush for torture and posted it here
http://afterdowningstreet.org/indictment

But I need your help before sending it to a prosecutor.

This is a joint effort to draft the best possible indictment of Bush for torture.

While we can and have drafted indictments and articles of impeachment for Bush for many crimes worse than torture, and while a torture conspiracy could include many people beyond Bush, this project is simply Bush and simply torture.

Will you help by posting your comments online on how this document can be improved?
http://afterdowningstreet.org/indictment